Not gonna lie, this is actually pretty sad. The content, I mean, in an emotional way. This definitely has a story behind it. It made me think of an all points bulletin or an amber alert, which, I'm assuming, was the intent.
It may be short, but it's a "real" piece of work. Can't go anywhere nowadays without seeing those flyers posted. Heartbreaking stuff, especially at that age
I think you definitely recreated what Hemingway originally did here. That short sentence really does tell a much larger story than just the few words that appear.
Not gonna lie, this is actually pretty sad. The content, I mean, in an emotional way. This definitely has a story behind it. It made me think of an all points bulletin or an amber alert, which, I'm assuming, was the intent.
ReplyDeleteI agree with zach this is a great piece just rather sad content
ReplyDeleteIt may be short, but it's a "real" piece of work. Can't go anywhere nowadays without seeing those flyers posted. Heartbreaking stuff, especially at that age
ReplyDeleteI think you definitely recreated what Hemingway originally did here. That short sentence really does tell a much larger story than just the few words that appear.
ReplyDeleteI, too, enjoyed this. There's so much that the imagination can run with here. I think you definitely created a flash fiction piece here. Good Job!
ReplyDeletewow, I do like the idea.
ReplyDeleteThere has to be more..has to be.
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